Friday, 1 May 2009

Tell me about London

1985

The five-year old sat cross-legged at his mother's feet. He liked to sit there. He loved listening to her stories, especially in candlelight, in the regular absence of electric power. NEPA, they called it then - National Electric Power Authority, though the locals preferred Never Expect Power Always.


Anyway, we stray from our main subject. Little Zibby loved sitting at his mummy's feet. She would tell stories of the tortoise and the hare, of the wicked stepmother and magical rivers, greedy children and wise old men. Her versions of stories passed down from generation to generation. But Zibby liked one story above others. "Tell me about London" he would say. "Mamma, tell me about London".


You see, Zibby's parents had spent 13 years in London before returning to Lagos in the late 70's. His elder brother had been born there, but Zibby missed out on the priviledge of dual nationality by one month. Somehow or other, he grew up with a facination about the city he had never known. He would dream about the snow, about his brother being played with by the facinated white neighbourhood kids, about the child minder whose name he had heard innumerable times, about the little house on Stanlake Road, the huge afros and bell-bottomed trousers. His "memories" of London were comprised of his mother's stories and the extensive collection of pictures sitting in the shelf under the television. As the stories were repeated over several nights and several months and years, he would imagine himself there, a happy dream which filled him with warmth and simple child-like happiness.

Were the seeds for his eventual relocation sowed during those tropical evening story sessions? Perhaps. What Zibby's young head could not have known was that the reality of London differed greatly from the city of his infantile dreams.

8 comments:

Anonymous said...

i'm not that exposed when it comes to writing but i know a good piece when i see one. i'm looking forward to the rest of it, nice one brov!!!!!!!!!!!!

ngkalu said...

look i plan to critisize, but i most confess that it's good and i am lookin 4ward to reading constantly. but wat is Zibby's brother's name or he doesnt plan to come up again in the future? Zibby didnt tell us how growing up was like. His back ground, skol in his local environment b4 relocating, childhood friends etc. fine the stories of his mother gave rise to his desire to relocate. But wat about an experience in his local environ?

EC said...

Thanks for the comments so far, much appreciated. Zibby's growing-up years will be revisited in due course, as I plan to intermittently use flashback to narrate key stories from his childhood/adolescence.

Chibuzo Okoro said...

Poor Zibby! The reality-slap must have left him red in the face. Looking forward to the next one.

I love your new name :-) Zibbidee-zib-zib!

Anonymous said...

Good read...

Anonymous said...

Good start. you should use the flashback mechanism to include the nailbiting and frustrating attempts to secure a visa interview date. This should add to the excitement of realising on being airborne that London had become a reality. This could come at the point of the momentary loss of the brief case. i look forward to more interesting write ups and of course, a constant reminder of the dual nationality narrow miss. I guess you know who has posted this comment.

Babs K said...

four thousand five hundred! 'yeepa' was what came to my mind. Thanks for not landing our hero in poverty from day one : )
No criticism on the writing for now..

Anonymous said...

love it, would be interesting to find out about how Zibby's first year in London was, his feelings, and observations where he lived, worked and schooled